lol, no problem, Jo, the slogan was really just a placeholder, in case anyone else had a better suggestion ... I just wanted to have
something in German on it.
ok, here we go again. The little running guy is still there, but I'm not in love with him. I really think there has to be some kind of "
witz" in the thing somewhere.
I was thinking it might look good to have "Deutschland" written in the same hand-script as the T-Shirts. Of course I don't know what font that is, alas.
Speaking of Deutschland - the two words "Germany Chapter" look better from the design POV. It'd be really good if we could say "Deutschland Chapter", or whatever the correct word for "Chapter" is in German. I don't know what to write. But a second word would be good!
Also, nothing stands out if everything is the same color. I think the green makes the German side of the flag stand out more. But here it is in blue (dasselbe in blau, lol!)
The swoosh is a little kräftiger, too. I tend toward the finer lines of the original ...
btw, the work is simple but the uploading and waiting for someone to comment is a PITA (do you know what PITA stands for?)